By bobby

She opened her eyes and for me it was real.
Realizing that the void is empty, so deep, so strong… a wordless song on a loop, a never ending tale of …

But it is there the…; the glow her soul emanates through the very touch of her skin and evokeing biological enhanced response.
A new found source of energy, …a revival of a dying essence, an attempt to fill the void…
my void, your void, our void.

To have life and not to be alive is that a crime … to be confined by social parameters when you cause no pain is that a crime.

I will be free I will live

She kissed me on my lips and smiled.

                                                                              written by bobby


6 Responses to “Daily Visits”


  1. 1 hsiK
    September 28, 2007 at 8:57 am

    Interesting:)

  2. 2 Jamaican Dawta
    September 21, 2007 at 10:57 am

    Ohhh.

    It reminds me of Ne-yo’s song, “Because of you.”

  3. September 21, 2007 at 8:23 am

    Now you getting the idea ok … here it is i am locked away in my prison but i get “daily visits” when i go and look for my partner on the side. i am questioning myself trying to find an excuse for my actions, for infidelity, trying to determine, should i stop and stay in prison or continue doing and feel like a criminal but then i am already in prison, …cause my need to be with her is so overwhelming. We both fill a void that exist within each of us but life social demands says we shouldn’t.

  4. 4 Jamaican Dawta
    September 21, 2007 at 8:16 am

    No man. Oh, so daily visits, would that be to a prison?

  5. September 21, 2007 at 8:11 am

    Ok what i am saying is that people don’t see “it” has being wrong socialy, but for me it is a prison that i need to break free from …in other words i am pointing you in the direction of how you feel about “it” are you a part of the social strata that helps to define these rules. for e.g most persons would want to do something adventurous but because of the dictates of society, refrain from doing so thus confining themselves to a emotional and mental prison that only they would be aware thus making themselves their own warders. So “it” the question …to have life and not be alive is it a crime.. hope i was able to do so with out being too long winded.

  6. 6 Jamaican Dawta
    September 21, 2007 at 8:00 am

    “To have life and not to be alive, is that a crime” is quite thought-provoking.

    I haven’t understood it fully (I was trying to get some clue from the title). Think you’re gonna need to enlighten me a bit on this one :)


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